Plot
Rouge and Ayame have a challenge - If Ayame can defeat Rouge, she has to give up the power stone. Rouge wins however, and as a result, her deal is she can make one request of Ayame and Ayame can't turn it down.
Page 1
Panel 1
Show Rouge and Ayame in their typical fighting outfits, squaring off against one another in a place that looks like an Ancient Egyptian temple. They are staring at one another intently - posed and waiting for their combat to begin.
Narrator: | Another day, Many miles away - another battle of sorts is set to begin. |
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Panel 2
Show a picture of Minase Iori wearing a cute referee outfit. She is holding a whistle in her mouth with one hand and holding her hand up in the air, ready to bring it down to start the fight.
Narrator: | What price hangs in the balance of this epic fight? |
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Panel 3
Zoom in on Ayame's face, grinning mischievously and looking confidently in front of her. She is looking to the left
Ayame: | So you swear on your honour - if you lose, *I* get your power stone?!? |
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Panel 4
Zoom in on Rouge's face, grinning and looking back just as confidently in front of her. She is looking to her right. Even those panel 3 and 4 are separate panels ..it should like their staring at one another.
Rouge: | Oh, definitely! And of course, should you lose, you have to do one thing for me, and you can't turn it down. |
Page 2
Panel 1
Show Ayame building up power in her hands and feet, they are all blowing a strong blue with energy. She's looking deadly serious, though she is sweating a bit.
Ayame:
| Bring it on! What could you possibly ask from me that I couldn't give?
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Ayame (thinking): | I mean...what is there? I have no stones...and I'm not rich...so? |
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Panel 2
Ayame hits Rouge on the cheek with the back of her fist.
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Panel 3
Ayame then knocks Rouge down to the ground with a circular kick to the head.
Ayame:
| And one more kick should do the trick!
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Rouge: | Uuughhhhhhh! |
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Panel 4
Rouge hops back up on to her feet in front of Ayame and lands in a fighting stance.
Rouge:
| Is that the best you can do, squirt?
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Ayame: | Oh? You're coming back for more? |
Page 3
Panel 1
Rouge does a jumping knee kick and Ayame barely avoids it.
Rouge:
| Did you really think those pathetic strikes could take me down?
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Ayame: | At least MINE hit, old woman! |
Ayame (thinking): | Damn..that was way too close! |
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Panel 2
Ayame does a spinning kick to Rouge's head, but Rouge dodges easily...
Ayame:
| Take that, Weirdo!
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Rouge:
| My my, resorting to name calling, are we? And is someone getting winded quickly?
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Ayame: | Never! |
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Panel 3
Rouge grabs Ayame's leg and pulls upwards hard, causing the Japanese girl to fall backwards.
Rouge:
| If you rush in, Little Tigress, an opponent could catch you off guard like - THIS!!!
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Ayame:
| Aaaauugghhh!!!
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Panel 4
Ayame is laying on her back. Rouge is sitting on Ayane's stomach with her knees pushing Ayame's arms down, keeping Ayame from being able to attack. Rouge is leaning over her with her right fist held up high in the air.
Rouge:
| I guess this means.... you're out!
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Ayame: | W...w...wait!!! |
Page 4
Panel 1
Rouge leaning over Ayame and sending her right fist down towards Ayame's face.
Rouge:
| Oh? Afraid of a hit from this 'old woman', now are we? Sorry, Little Tigress, but this is the end!
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Ayame: | Gyeeahhhhhhhhhh!! |
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Panel 2
Rouge's punch stops just centimetres from Ayame's face. Ayame is frozen in shock and fear.
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Panel 3
Rouge smiles wolfishly down at Ayame.
Rouge:
| I...win...
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Ayame:
| Ah..shit!
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Rouge: | And now...as for my request... |
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Panel 4
Rouge is whispering into Ayame's ear. She looks very shocked...and also embarassed
Rouge:
| What I want is...bbzzz....bzzzz.... bzzz....
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Ayame: | But..but...that... WHAT!??! |
Page 5
Panel 1
Close up of Ayame's face sighing sadly - a bit of tears in her eyes.
Rouge (offscreen):
| A deal is a deal, is it not, my dear?
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Ayame:
| Yes...yes...I got it! Fine!
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Ayame (thinking): | I was wrong! This is the worst outcome ever! |
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Panel 2
Show Ayame and Rouge walking into an Arabic temple together, side by side. The Arabic temple is very deserted, but very clean and full of pillows and ornate statues - also jars of burning incense surround the area.
Narrator:
| A week and a half later and many miles away.
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Ayame:
| Where... what is this place? Did we really need to come all the way out here just for this?
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Rouge (offscreen): | Oh yes. This was left to me by my dear father. It contains the mana essence I require for the ritual. |
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Panel 3
Rouge spins Ayame around suddenly and looks sternly at her, Ayame looks taken off guard.
Rouge:
| Now, you HAVE read the scrolls I gave you, right? You know what you need to do?
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Ayame:
| WHAT!??! Already?!! We just got here! Can't I rest first?
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Rouge: | Oh, don't worry about that. We'll both be sleeping plenty when we finish the ritual. |
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Panel 4
Ayame looks a bit uneasy - but begins a slow sultry dance - rubbing her breasts and vagina through her clothing. Rouge is sitting cross-legged on a pillow, watching and smiling.
Ayame:
| I...I...hope I get it right.
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Rouge: | Hmm...I get the feeling you'll do just fine! |
Page 6
Panel 1
Ayame is dancing more erotically...her face is flushed and her hands are rubbing her crotch and pussy even harder, her face bright red as she moans. Rouge is watching - hearts in her eyes.
Ayame:
| To my Mistress who owns me... I submit to your heart. Please...claim this young lass and allow her to serve you.
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Rouge:
| Ohh yeaah. Please do disrobe, my lovely gracious servant.
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Ayame: | Oh yeesss...my body be thine to view! |
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Panel 2
Ayame has sensuously removed her outfit and is tossing it casually to the side - showing plain cotton panties and no bra. She has small but pert A sized breasts...incense begins to rise up around her
Ayame:
| Please view mine breasts - the breasts that will feed, the breasts that will satisfy.
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Rouge (offscreen): | Oh yeah! Show me more! More! |
Ayame:
| Though they be small - they long to feed the lips of those who wish to drink from their humble teats.
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Rouge (offscreen): | Oh I'm...sure they'll grow in time, honey! |
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Panel 3
Ayame sliding off her panties with her back to the camera..showing her spread asscheeks with sweat drizzling down the crack of her asshole into the asspit.. Incense is surrounding her in a whirlpool cloud. Rouge is watching, horny as hell...her eyes full of hearts.
Ayame:
| Oh loving, Mistress. My lovely ass, my beautiful ass - it longs to pleasure and please you...
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Rouge:
| I will surely taste it soon, my sweet servant
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Ayame: | It is ready for you, my darling, my world. My panties are of no use to me now. |
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Panel 4
Close up of Ayame's asshole, with her index finger sliding deep inside, making loud squishing sounds.
Ayame:
| Its warm and tight..and delicious. Don't you want to touch it my love?
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Rouge: | Ooohh....I can't wait to! |
Page 7
Panel 1
Close up of Ayame's face as she turns to look at Rouge, sucking her finger clean. Rouge is sitting still but rubbing her crotch through her outfit, moaning
Ayame:
| Hmmm..hmm..it tastes divine!
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Rouge:
| Hmmm..suck that clean, you dirty girl.
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Ayame: | How could I have degenerated to this? I'm sucking a finger that was just in my ass?!?! And....worse.... I'm liking it!!! |
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Panel 2
Ayame dancing in front of Rouge - moving her crotch provocatively in front of the dark skinned woman's face who is still masturbating ...close to orgasm.
Ayame:
| Oh Mistress...Oh Mistress, be this what thee seek? Be this what thou wouldst have bear thy seed?
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Rouge:
| You bet your ass it will!!! Lay down on the floor, RougeWife.
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Ayame: | Thou hast called me by mine true name - RougeWife - thusly, lay down I must, for thy dominance... |
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Panel 3
Ayame is laying on a series of pillows, moaning loudly as incense flowing into her nostrils. Rouge begins to lick her hairless snatch hungrily.
Rouge:
| You wanted me...you got me, my delicious submissive tart!
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Ayame:
| Oh damn, yes! Please! Ooh, your i...i...incense! It's changing me inside!
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Rouge:
| It's making you mine..you belong to me now.
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Ayame: | This is the best day of my life! |
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Panel 4
Close up up Rouge licking Ayame's cunt wetly, streams of flooding juices running off of her tongue. Ayame is screaming out lustfully, holding tightly onto Rouge's head.
Rouge:
| Hmmm..mmmmm..aauuuughh.. hmmm
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Ayame: | Mistress!!! AH!!! MISTRESS!!!!! |
Page 8
Panel 1
Show Ayame moaning and holding her cunt lips open as she sprays a fountain of cum into Rouge's mouth.
Ayame:
| HOllllyyy ffuuuuccckkk!
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Rouge:
| Ahhhh more!
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Ayame: | How...am I cumming...so much? |
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Panel 2
Rouge is standing up and removing her clothing. Ayame is rubbing her cunt and ass with her fingers at the same time, masturbating like mad.
Rouge:
| I tire of the wait! I demand to take you now!
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Ayame:
| Oh Mistress...yes! Yes! Make me your love slave...
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Rouge: | You already are! You're mine and will remain so until you've given me what I want. |
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Panel 3
Rouge keeps Ayame on her back and straddles her face...slowing lowering her cunt onto her face.
Rouge:
| I'm sure you know what to do to this, don't you?
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Ayame:
| A proper love slave always knows what to do for her mistress. A thorough tongue cleaning is in order, I do believe!
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Rouge:
| Then get to work, RougeWife!
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Panel 4
Show Ayane tonguing Rouge's dripping cunt out deeply, whilst Rouge bounces up and down on her face.
Ayame:
| Sslurp..slurp!
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Rouge: | Oh fuck! Who knew my little love servant would learn so fast...and be such a natural! YYEEESSS!!!! |
Page 9
Panel 1
Rouge squeals in delight as she cums hard, causing Ayame to swallow noisily.
Rouge:
| Ahhhhhh...Ahhh...here it goes! Here it goes...yeessss!!!!
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Ayame:
| Gulpp gulp gulp gulp...swallow...
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Rouge's cunt: | Spplllosshhhh! |
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Panel 2
Rouge spreading Ayame's legs, moving between them and smiling at her. Ayame is laying on her back and breathing hard - and the incense is still blowing furiously into their face. Ayame's eyes have a distant look to them.
Rouge:
| Now the main course! What we came here for.
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Ayame:
| Destiny?
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Rouge:
| Yes, my darling! Our souls have meant to be united since before our births! Now, we shall finally join!.
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Ayame: | Aim true, Mistress. |
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Panel 3
Rouge lays on top of Ayame and begins to pussy fuck her lovingly....Ayame and Rouge are both moaning loudly and desperately..
Rouge:
| OH YES! I've wanted this ever since I first met you!
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Ayame:
| Take me! Fille me! Claim me! My looooveee!
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Rouge:
| Your pussy...it's so wet and needy! You desire me, too!
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Panel 4
Show the back side of the girls. Their asses are wiggling...and their cunts are rubbing together furiously.
Sound effects:
| Rub rub... drip...drip...
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Narrator: | And thus began the most intimate and crucial part of the ceremony... |
Page 10
Panel 1
Show the back sides again, the cunts rubbing harder, sweating pouring off the asses and cunts, making the ground soaking wet...
Ayame (offscreen): | AAHhhhhh AHHHHHHHH AAHHHHH
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Rouge (offscreen): | Aaahhhh so good! So good... I can't control it! |
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Panel 2
Show their faces, Rouge's tongue is in Ayame's mouth in a very passionate and sloppy wet kiss, as the two look deep into one another's eyes.
Rouge:
| Ooh fuck!
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Ayame: | More!!!! MORE!!!!! |
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Panel 3
Focus on Rouge's eyes locking with Ayame's, their eyes staring directly into one another.
Rouge:
| Now...the moment has come...it is time, darling.
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Ayame:
| I'm....I'm so nervous... Can I do it right?
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Rouge: | Don't be nervous! |
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Panel 4
X ray view of Ayame's womb. All wording comes off as narration boxes - red for Ayame, blue for Rouge.
Rouge:
| Produce an egg for me.... this I command of you!
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Ayame:
| But...But I'm so young...can I really....
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Rouge:
| Not too young by far! Say the incantation...keep your promise!
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Page 11
Panel 1
Show an egg slowly appearing in the womb. Again, all word balloons should appear as narration boxes.
Ayame:
| By the power of life of Gaia, by the giver and the progeny, may my love vessel produce young for my chosen mistress!
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Rouge:
| Produce it! NOW!
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Ayame:
| FINE!!! Take my egg! Make me mommy!
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Rouge: | Finally! |
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Panel 2
Close up view of Rouge's cunt exploding outwards an eerie green glowing and sparkling liquid from her cunt right into Ayame's cunt hole. Again..all speaking should appear as narration boxes.
Ayame:
| WHAT the??!?
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Rouge:
| FUUCCKKKKK..CUUUUMM!!!!!! Make me a child, my loveservant!
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Ayame: | So much...you've cum so much in me!!! I'll do it! I'll bear your lovechild! |
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Panel 3
Show Rouge fucking Ayame doggy style now, cum dropping from their cuntholes as she fucks her hard. Ayane's eyes are crossed and her tongue is hanging out, drooling copiously.
Rouge:
| How's that?!??! AND THAT!???! AND THAT!??!
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Ayame: | Oh Mistress! Thank you! Thank you! You've made me so full!!! |
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Panel 4
Show Rouge in a scissoring position with Ayame now..fucking her like mad. Rouge looks nearly psychopathic in her hard fucking of Ayame. Ayame has that ahegao look on her face..
Rouge:
| BEG FOR IT! BEG NOW!
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Ayame:
| MORE!!!! PLEASE, MORE!!!!
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Page 12
Panel 1
Now Rouge is on top of Ayame again, fucking her cunthole missionary style again, both are cumming hard. Their bodies and faces are reddened from fucking so long and there are light scratch marks on Rouge's body from Ayame's nails
Ayame:
| I cum....one last time...for thee...
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Rouge:
| Oh my love...
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Ayame:
| My Love, our baby...is made!
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Rouge: | OH yes...Let's cum together to celebrate! |
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Panel 2
Show them laying together in the moonlight...naked, tired and covered in sticky wet cum. Both are panting. Ayame looks a bit annoyed...Rouge, however, is quite content.
Ayame:
| What did..that incense...do to me.
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Rouge:
| It only made what you had to do easier. It loosened up your desires.
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Ayame: | You DO know that I only have to bear you a child. That was your demand. |
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Panel 3
Rouge and Ayame looking into one another's eyes lovingly.
Ayame:
| But why go through all that work to force me to bear your young? Why not just marry a...
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Rouge:
| A boy? Listen my sweet, I have lot of travelling to do to bring happiness to the world. I can't do that while carrying and bearing a child.
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Ayame: | However, I dearly want children, so having my lovely opponent bear and raise my daughter, it is the best of both worlds! |
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Panel 4
Ayame blushing and trying to act tsundere, while Rouge licks her cheek wetly.
Ayame:
| Raise? Don't get ahead of yourself. I don't have to stick around after she's born, you know?
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Rouge:
| We'll see how you feel when she's born...
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Page 13
Panel 1
Show an Arabic-style tent with the silhouette of a pregnant Ayame on her back, her legs spread... and a wet nurse in position to remove the baby...
Narration:
| 9 months later...
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Ayame:
| AAhhhhhhhhh Ahhhhhhhh?it hurts!!! It hurts!!
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Woman:
| Push dear, push! Push with all of your might! She's almost out now!
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Ayame: | I'm doing all I can! AAAahhhhh! The pain! |
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Panel 2
Show the upper half of Ayame in a loose sheet shift, being supported by a fully dressed Rouge. Rouge is holding her softly..and stroking her head gently from behind..and looking down with concern. Ayame is screaming in pain and looking downwards.
Ayame:
| She...She's coming out now!
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Rouge:
| Just hold on a bit more, Darling! Just a bit more!
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Ayame: | Oh! Ooh.., please come out, darling! Come out for Mommy! |
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Panel 3
Show Ayame and Rouge both holding the baby now. The baby is swathed in fancy Indian cloth and is crying. Both parents are smiling happily at the cute newborn.
Ayame:
| She's so beautiful!
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Rouge:
| As beautiful as her mother...and that's not easy to do...
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Ayame: | Maybe, but she has YOUR eyes, darling. |
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Panel 4
Ayame looks off to the side, pouting a little, and Rouge, looks down a bit, saddened.
Ayame:
| Though this does mean our deal is done! I've given you what you wanted.
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Rouge:
| I...know...
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Ayame:
| I can leave now, and just let you and your daughter move on together.
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Rouge: | I...I understand. It's your right. I won't stop you. |
Page 14
Panel 1
Show Ayame for once grabbing a very surprised Rouge and kissing her powerfully and wetly. The baby is looking up at them confused.
Ayame:
| As if I could ever do that after all of this, my mate, my love!
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Rouge:
| Hmmmmpphhh!!!
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Baby (thinking) | Am I being ignored? Maybe I need to cry louder? |
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Panel 2
Show a silhouette of a travelling troupe (all female) moving through the desert. They're singing and dancing as they move along happily in the distance. (Two adults..many children of various sizes)
Voices: | Don't you know that love is all? Love is where we all begin... |
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Panel 3
Show an older Rouge and Ayame (pregnant again) walking arm and arm together through the desert surrounded by 8 children. They all have tanned skin like Rouge, but all have different coloured hair.
Rouge:
| You stayed with me. You made my life complete.
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Ayame:
| My love, how could I leave someone who needed me so much, she'd risk her own quest, just to have me? And I've not regretted my decision since!
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Rouge: | And I've never regretted risking my powerstones. They were nothing, you were everything. |
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Panel 4
Show them kissing warmly in the lower left column, the face of Futaba (Mitsudomoe) is coming out of a circle like Porky the Pig does at the end of Warner Brother's cartoons.
Ayame:
| I love you, my darling.
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Rouge:
| I live...for you, my love.
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Futuba: | Bbb...bbbb...beee... That's LoL, Folks! |
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