Chapter 1 : Finished
Chapter 2 : Finished 14/Sep/2013
NOTES FROM THE AUTHOR (chapter 2) :
About the cover, like in the first chapter doesn't says much about the content of the chapter,
this is made with a purpose, i don't want spoil the events... but maybe there's something hiding,, ^_^
I used to think like the character who is talking here (who is?)... but, it was maybe an excuse cuz i was affraid to be in love again... i don't think like that anymore..
The script was writen even before the contest idea, so the scenes aren't forced just for introduce the winners characters, the idea was to show some sex scenes to ilustrate Bryce's thoughts...emotions of the characters like the girl crying< for something that she just did but she's not happy about) ...or when on previous page the character talk about "marvelous things", and we see a couple kissing (they suppost are deep in love)... i wanted to use random characters but then i realized it was a nice chance to give something to the readers... actually there are lot of random characters on this chapter so technically i could be adding a lot more (specially girls) but i didn't wanted to take a risk... i had a mental struggle with myself.. cuz these pages are ready a week ago.. but i need to keep a rythm.. i did it on the previous chapter.. you can't just leave some uncomplete idea and wait to the people to understand what you mean on the next update... for example i had the idea of post these two pages at once ...becouse it complete what Bryce is saying, but at the same time i can't haste all, the comic is not finished yet and if i want to update daily (it will be 13 pages btw) i have to update slowly... did a couple of typos on past page (fixed now) and i couldn't wait.. i really wanted to post these pages together so i'm doing it now...
About the clifhanger.. i promess at the beggining of the next chapter i'll go straight to the events that everyone want to know |